Blake's favorite experience


My favorite experience with sports is when I scored a really
cool goal against a rival team in my hockey game. My team was playing Wayzata,
and this game determined which team was going to regions. No one scored in the
first period so the score going into the second was 0-0. Then at the end of the
first one of our teammates got a penalty. So at the beginning of the second period
we would be on penalty kill. So I and three other teammates went out to kill of
the penalty. Well it was a pretty even game between us and Wayzata until one of
the Wayzata guys missed the pass to the point, and I raced after the puck
trying to beat another guy racing to it to. He beat me bye just a little bit
but then my teammate pick the puck up and try to go to the net but got tied up.
Meanwhile I was watching the play and trying to pick out the perfect time to
take the puck. Then I saw my chance so I went for it and I stole the puck and
got on a breakaway. It was just me and the goalie. I came it faked a shot went to
the right and pulled a spin move, and puck the puck through the five hole of
the goalie. It was the best goal I have ever had in my life. The crowd was
going crazy. That goal put us up but 1 the score was 1-0. In the end we lost
the game 3-2 in the last 30 seconds of the game but it still was an exciting game
and I had a really cool goal, so in the end it was my favorite experience.
Fun experience - you retell it effectively. Need to break up ideas into paragraphs and incorporate images throughout.
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